We started with a simple sentence and added some words to make it sound more exciting for the reader.
The cat sat on the mat.
The pitch black cat sat on the mat.
The pitch black cat sat curled up on the mat.
The pitch black cat sat curled up on the fluffy orange mat.
It makes a difference don't you think? What can you come up with? We will post the best!
7 comments:
The cow ate grass.
The black and white spotted cow ate grass.
The black and white spotted cow greedily ate grass.
The black and white spotted cow greedily ate juicy green grass.
By KG
The bird sat on a branch.
The blue feathered bird sat on a branch.
The blue feathered bird sat watching everyone on a branch.
The blue feathered bird sat watching everyone on a brown spikey branch.
Very clever room 17! From room 20
I love maths. bm
i love the black cat on the orange mat. js
The puppy ate the bone.
The cute fluffy puppy ate the bone.
The cute fluffy puppy happily ate the bone.
The cute fluffy puppy happily ate the white ,squeaky bone.
K.C room17
i think i have another one
My dad went to sleep.
My lazy and hungry dad went to sleep.
My lazy and hungry dad lazily went to sleep.
My lazy and hungry dad lazily went to sleep snoring.
K.C Room17
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